Hey loyal soldiers of the Empire,

I just finished editing Book 1, but there are still a few things I’m not entirely happy with, and I’d love to hear your thoughts.

First, the ending of the first book

—while I’ve planned out the overall story, I never decided exactly where each book should end. Right now, I’m torn between Chapter 81 and Chapter 117 as the stopping point for Book 1.

Second, I’m still not completely happy with the starting classes the MC can choose in Chapter 3. I recently realized that they’re almost identical to the ones Jake can pick in The Primal Hunter. That wasn’t intentional—I just wanted to use the most basic combat classes that advanced ones could evolve from. I’m not sure if this is a problem, but I’d still like to tweak them a bit. If you have any ideas for alternative starter classes, feel free to share!

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Once these two points are sorted, I’ll be sending the book off for professional editing. If you have any other suggestions for improvements, please let me know! You can also send me a private message if you’d rather not post in the comments—I usually respond pretty quickly.

One more thing: Aethon is giving us a new cover! If you have any cool ideas for an image or a scene that would look great on it, drop them in the comments!

Oh, and since I asked before but want to bring it up again—we’re also getting an audiobook! If there’s a narrator you’d love to hear for this book, let me know. I already have a list from the last time I asked, but I want to make sure we get someone who really tells the story rather than just yelling the whole time.

That’s all for now. Thanks for your help, and see you tomorrow with the next chappie!

Cheers!

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